Poem

[Serenity]

I Love You

As I am walking

I see her talking

Wanting to say hi

I pass with a sigh

If only she knew

What I would do

To feel the delight

Of holding her tight

But my thoughts interrupted

As the halls are corrupted

Down my face a tear does shed

Oh the things I wish I would have said

If only I had spoken to her

These feelings of mine, she might concur

When the hallways have cleared

A thought of her appeared

When grim realization hit me

It is then that I begin to see

That I just missed my chance

For my life of romance

But now its just far too late

What we had could have been great

With a sigh I turn to walk away

When she shows up to make my day

With a smile and an embrace

And a soft kiss to the face

I bend to her ear

So that I can hear

As she whispers to me

These words of three:

I love you




I had help writing a lot of it, but this is the first version of the finished poem. ^-^

Is it really that bad? >_>

[murch]

not bad at all, but i dont know anything about poems, to me i think rhyming poems like this are good, but it seems like you were just trying to find words to rhyme and plugged em in, not everything has to rhyme :P

[Serenity]

I didn't write all of it. >_>

The stuff I DID write fit the rest of it too..>_>

Thanks, though. O_o

[holdo]

Not that bad, I aint no expert at poems (:P) but it's not that bad =)