Poetry

[Fluxcore]

LOL. Discuss poetry here :)

I just made a new poem right now. It's in my sig atm.

[Hootnnuts]

god damn chris ur turning emo!!! the signs r all there!!!

oh and yea... i dont do poetry much but my dad did. before the age of the emos... O.O

[Fluxcore]

LOL GNOES. I always write poems when it comes to girl problems... it's weird. It helps me think lol. And so far... only one big girl problem in my life :|

[Hootnnuts]

oh well keep it up! i like the $5.99 hammer. but everyone knows its not $5.99... TAX!

[Fluxcore]

ROFL hoot.

[Hootnnuts]

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[hynfaeries0]

no longer about poetry? lol

poetry is good sometimes and other times it's just confusing.

[Hootnnuts]

yea it was about the poetry he made.

anyways i tried writing poetry for a class assignment and im not too good. not much of a rhymer :D so i just did some stuff that didnt rhyme lol. and still got a 100 :D

[hynfaeries0]

yea it was about the poetry he made.

anyways i tried writing poetry for a class assignment and im not too good. not much of a rhymer :D so i just did some stuff that didnt rhyme lol. and still got a 100 :D[/b]

poetry doesn't have to rhyme just a good beat and lots of emotion. XD

[SuicideForAbheng]

i love writing poem and i already have 100+pages of a Microsoft word lol

Last Goodbye

Tonight please bid me your last goodbye
For I can’t stand still here no more
I’m cold now, so cold and alone I want to go home
I know you’ll never come back, never again
See my heart shattered into pieces, hear me cry in pain

I’m tired, weak from all the hurt you put me through
Your spoken love for me keep echoing
Echoing, getting me insane
Insane, yes, for so many unspoken reasons
Reasons, your reasons you vaguely uttered

Why believing leads one to bleeding?
And loving so much means leaving the other in the end?
Why trusting ends up to deceiving?
Everything is like whirlwind in my head
I’m going round and round in circles I
Actually don’t understand

We now live under separate skies
You’re starting to live your life
I’m struggling to hold on
With silent tears, I let go
Let go of everything that’s holding me back to move on

My dreams forever will be kept
For it is only with you I fell everything
My tears would never fall again
For it is only with you I could pour my self out
Hide my self I don’t want to get hurt again

Thank you for loving and hurting me
I could never hate you
For my love could see deeper beyond
You thought the limits of my understanding
Go now, just go and never look back
For all you can see is still the same one
Who made you his everything?
Follow the road you’ve been longing to conquer
And when you get there please….
….never looks back again

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PC

I've had one of those days
you know what I mean
so I sit back and relax
and turn on my screen.

I'll talk to all my friends
who know just what to say
to make my stresses go
and my troubles fade away.

My friends you're always there for me
whenever I feel blue
and though we've never met before
I know our friendships true.

And although we haven't been friends for long
in this short time it seems
we shared so many things already
our hopes, our fears, our dreams.

We come from different walks of life
but we share a common bond
and it's time to say that of all of you
I've grown so very fond.

So friends thanks for being there
whenever I've needed you
I know you're always there for me
and you know I'm there for you.

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Last Chance

ive tried to think
the sweties memories
the laugh the smile
but it's all gone

i want to make things right
things will never be they where

you are the air i breath
makes my heart beat
that keeps me alive
dont leave me

the sacrifice the pain
the tears the hurt
dont tell me
its nothing

even for the last time
hear my side let me explain
i want to make things right
even for the last goodbye.

[An1ken]

Thats kewl mate I like the LAST CHANCE one

[SuicideForAbheng]

this is a fresh poem
i have a band in almost a year but they replace me without my concent

this is for them

WRITES30
Didn't see an easy way
it was hurtin' me bad;
thinking that you replace me
So i decide to move alone
Thought it time to break up
I had to play on my own

You were always wantin' me
To fill up the missing spot
Be your rhythm
Be your backup
You wanted far too much
Should've walked away before.

its hard to see that
years of bonding
just destory in a single day
now i walk alone
with only my guitars on my side

now that it comes to end
writes30 is just only me
I know its hard to do it alone
but thats all i can do
To play my music alone

[Absolute]

looks really cool suicide sorry couldnt bother to read it lmao :)

[SuicideForAbheng]

looks really cool suicide sorry couldnt bother to read it lmao :)[/b]
haha your just spamming lol


it wont change
the love for you
i hope u hear this
the song of my heart

its like a world
that dont stop spining
love wont resting

its like a river
that wont stop flowing
love that will never end

a song that i just translate in english lol very meaningful lyrics lol

[Absolute]

its nice lol what language was it ?

[Aloe]

that song is so cool.. :o.. very nice lyrics

[An1ken]

Nice work man keep it up

[SuicideForAbheng]

the lyrics is a filipino song tagalog
magbalik by callalily
magbalik mean return

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A8Df5PsBasc
if u want to see i really like the video too
it show different kind or relationship and problem of breaks up

another poem


Those little things we sometimes do
seem to go unnoticed
But all the things I do for you
you don't just let pass by
Each time I do a little for you
I can tell from the start
You know that all I do for you
comes from within my heart.
I enjoy giving to you because
with each little thing I do, you smile
And that says more than any words
your smile lasts me for miles.
So as long as I am able
I will always make you smile
by giving such a little
but making it last a while.
Know you are so special
In each and every way
I don't know where I would be
without you here with me today.



missing you


The first time we met,
I knew I had a friend.
The thing I did not know
is that I would want to
love you until the very end.
Your precious love has
turned my life completely around,
I feel like I'm walking,
but my feet don't seem to
touch the ground.
Sometimes you seem to be
my shinning light
guiding me through the long, dark night.
As I lie alone in bed
thinking of you and I
I wonder if you think of me too
as one more night slowly drags by.
I wish I were there with you,
kissing your sweet lips
under the pale moon light,
and holding you, so very tight.
You really are the man of my dreams
and I can't wait to be with you,
for the rest of my life.
I know our time away
seems like an eternity,
but I'll wait forever to be in your life.
I love you,
I need you,
I want you,
and I will for all my life.

[An1ken]

Wow you really like writing ey mate gj

[SuicideForAbheng]

yup writing is my other self ^_^

[An1ken]

Thats good mate at least you know what you want