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Serenity
09-02-2007, 05:10 PM
Life...

Like glass, it is broken with pressure added, if in the slightest...

We travel through life....

Each and every day....

We think we are invincible...

That we can't be beaten...

It's tough, I know....

My friend died last Tuesday....

In a car wreck...

He just turned 18...

He was expected to be back to redo his last year of schooling...

I can't believe he's gone...


He was a friend I hung out with at lunch and during the morning before classes started...

I just can't believe that I won't see him again...


Meh, not much...

I've never been a poet...

But here's a song/poem I just wrote...

comment if you want...



Every Moment...


As real as a finger...
As fragile as glass...
This is the moment
When life seems to pass...

You live every moment
you take it all in...
you enjoy all life's hardships...
you assume that you'll win...

You wake everyday
you breathe and you play
you walk into this world...
where everything is okay

You live every moment
you take it all in...
you enjoy all life's hardships...
you assume that you'll win...

You look at your friends
laugh with a smile
you drive in your car
and you chill for a while...

You live every moment
you take it all in...
you enjoy all life's hardships...
you assume that you'll win...

you're cruising with your friends
you're driving around town...
one moment you're alive...
the next you are down

You live every moment
you take it all in...
you enjoy all life's hardships...
you assume that you'll win...

you gasp for a breath
as the blood squirts around
today was your last
before you're dead in the ground

he lived every moment
he took it all in...
he embraced life's hardships
but this time...he didn't win

In loving memory of a good friend...

Rest in Peace John Deyo...

Rest in Peace

bump...

You guys can reply to shit about jerking off, or about myspace and facebook, or even about freakin' drugs and sex.

But when it comes to something like helping out a member with coping with his friend's death, you guys can't even read the fucking post.

WHY?

Is it that because you guys don't give a rat's ass about who lives and who dies? Do you guys just don't care about serious discussion?

What the fuck is wrong with this picture?

assholes. <_<

Aloe
09-02-2007, 05:13 PM
simple reason I ahvent seen this.. o_o..
I feel sorry for you :(.. I would feel so fucking crappy if a friend of mine would die.. :/

Serenity
09-02-2007, 05:18 PM
w00t

three days later. =|

I guess masturbation is more important than death, hmm?

I bumped the sunuvabitch three times. =|

w/e



yeah, i do feel crappy.

Carnage
09-02-2007, 05:20 PM
I know how you feel dude.. My friend Kacey died in a car accident.. She was thrown off the overpass... No one was wearing seatbelts in the truck...

Serenity
09-02-2007, 05:21 PM
It's hard to believe because you go into minor shock.

-sigh-

Nothing can be done now.

T_T



TWO OF YOU HAVE REDEEMED YOURSELF OF ASSHOLEISM

murch
09-02-2007, 07:28 PM
maybe the reason people dont reply to this is because they dont know what to say, its alot harder to talk to someone about losing a close friend then it is to talk about jerking off, now this is the first time ive even seen this topic and i truly am sorry bout your friend, but to go off because people dont reply isnt the way to deal with things, i myself normally scan a post as fast as possible to see if i would like to read it, you posted this in members life as the topic title "As real as a finger, as fragile as glass..., this is the moment, when life seems to pass..." now if i had done hear what i normally do and what im sure alot of others have done, i read the title and i quickly scanned the post and assumed this was only about a poem that you had written, once again im truly sorry bout your friend passing but if its sympathy posts you want then post a title like, "i need help coping", or "a good friend of mine just passed" not the title of the poem you wrote about his death.


personally i liked the poem to, but honestly you dont have to call people assholes for them not posting it was just a small mishap, once again im sorry for your friends passing if you need anything let me know and ill try and take care of it.

Serenity
09-02-2007, 10:38 PM
Nah

S'ok

I never said close friend.

Seriously, you guys say I'm sorry and that's about it.

It's amazing how people completely bypass something because something else talks about jerking off. =|

Fallen
09-03-2007, 01:56 AM
I'm really sorry your friend died..
:(